النقد غير الحقد - منتديات الفطاحله


 

 

وبشر الصابرين الذين إذا أصابتهم مصيبة قالوا إنا لله وإنا إليه راجعون ، ببالغ الأسى والحزن انتقل الى رحمة الله تعالى ظهر يوم الثلاثاء 25/2/2025م والدنا (الدكتور عثمان الطويل) مؤسس منتديات الفطاحلة ومدير عام المنتديات صاحب العضوية  (الطائر المهاجر) رحمه الله تعالى وتمت الصلاة عليه بعد صلاة العصر ليوم الأربعاء 26/2/2025م ودفنه بمقبرة شمال الرياض .

سيبقى المنتدى مفتوحا كأرشيف وذكرى بشكل دائم بإذن الله ، وقد تم ايقاف المشاركات بالمنتدى نهائيا.
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همس القوافي للشعر النبطي قصائد من إبداع شعراء الفطاحلة لم يمضي عليها اكثر من سنه

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النقد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             غير                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              الحقد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              والكل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              معروففي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             هندسة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              علم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              العقول                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              الذكيه
اللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             تميز                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              راعي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              العقل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              وتشوفإن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              الخطاء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               مبداه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               نفس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               رديه
وترجح                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             العاقل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             على                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              كل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ملقوفو  فيها  نمط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¹ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط·آ¢ط¢آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬للعرف  ما   هي   غبيه
وتقييم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  الموضع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  تقييم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   منصوفحتى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   تجنب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    فكرت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    الاوحديه
فكر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       العقل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       راجح                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ولا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        هو                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        بمكلوفتعليم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   جاهل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   عاشق                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    الجاهليه
والمجتمع   كله    ملايين    وط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¹ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط·آ¢ط¢آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬لوفوالناسط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¹ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط·آ¢ط¢آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ماعة    ولا    هي     رضيه
جموع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ضد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            جموع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            وصفوف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             لصفوفهذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                يبي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 هذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 وذيه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 لذيه
وهذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       يخوف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       قوم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        وهذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        به                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        الخوفوهذاط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¹ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط·آ¢ط¢آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬وى  الصفحات  و  هذا  مطيه
وهذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             تحده                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             عن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             مطاميعه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ظروفغصب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       (ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       عليه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ظروف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       وقته                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       قويه
وهذا على  العالم  مسلط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¹ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط·آ¢ط¢آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬له  سيوفظنه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ما                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        هالناس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        مخلوق                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        زيه
يشوف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      كل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       الناس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       عينه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ضعوفونفسه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              تدهور                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              به                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               بير(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               هبيه
عالي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      يحسب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      انه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      على                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      راس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       شرشوفينزل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              غصب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              مبداء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              الجاذبيه
وهرج                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       القفى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ضعف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        (ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ولا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        هو                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        بمخلوفوفي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             مجلس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              الضيعه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              له                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              الاغلبيه
موضوع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           منقول                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           (ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           وموضوع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            محذوفوجلسة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   عصر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   تمتد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    للمغربيه
و                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        اذا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        حصل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        معها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        من                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        الكيف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         مرشوفشاهي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ربيع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        و                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        دلة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         (ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         شاذليه
ولى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             زمان                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             الخوف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             واليوم                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              بريوفولى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              زمن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              ريمه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               وعصر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               العبيه
هذا زمانط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¹ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط·آ¢ط¢آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬هل الحكي لسان وحروفمجد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  السوالف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   واليدين                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   الخفيه
اللي تسير ابها المشاعر  علىط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¸ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ£ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¹ط·آ·ط¢آ£ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ£ط¢آ¢ط£آ¢أ¢â€ڑآ¬ط¹â€کط·آ¢ط¢آ¬ط·آ·ط¢آ¹ط·آ¢ط¢آ©ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ·ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ·ط·آ¢ط¢آ¢ط·آ·ط¢آ¢ط·آ¢ط¢آ¬روفجال                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   القرابة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   ونبرة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    العنصريه
واللي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             تحوفها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             على                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             الغش                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             وتحوفنار                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  الخطاء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   والعيب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   والمهزليه
و                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       تنسى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        المبادي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        كلها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        كنها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        تنوففوق                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              المبادي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               و                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               المبادي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               دنيه
و                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       محد(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ترى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       عن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       مجمل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       الناس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        مكلوفوكل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        (ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        حياته                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        في                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        حياة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        قضيه
والنقد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             غير                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             الحقد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             والكل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              معروفمبداء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ذكي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       يا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        اهل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        العقول                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        الذكيه




صالح سعود / أبو مهند






توقيع صالح سعود
 
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قديم 20-10-2009, 06:32 AM   رقم المشاركة : 2
مبروك بن ماضي
شاعر/عضو شرف
 الصورة الرمزية مبروك بن ماضي





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  النقاط : 10
  الحالة :مبروك بن ماضي غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد


اخوي المبدع : أبو مهند
الشاعر / صالح سعود
الف صح لسانك على هذه الرااائعه ..
سعدت بقراءتها وتشرفت بحضوري هنا
سجل اعجابي وتقبل تحياتي وتقديري
أخوك / بن ماضي







توقيع مبروك بن ماضي
 
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قديم 20-10-2009, 07:17 AM   رقم المشاركة : 3
صنداح الزلامى
شاعر/VIP عضو شرف
 الصورة الرمزية صنداح الزلامى





معلومات إضافية
  النقاط : 10
  الحالة :صنداح الزلامى غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد


الشاعرالقدير // صالح بن سعود

الف الف صحة للسانك ابدعت بكل حرف كتبت

قصيدة جميلة تحكي واقع ملموس وهكذا الشعراء

لابد وان يكونوا هم من يرسم في قصائدة مثل ما تكلمت

عنه لحيث ان الشعر رسالة من خلالها يتفهم الاغلبية

سجل اعجابي واحترامي لك







توقيع صنداح الزلامى
 
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قديم 20-10-2009, 07:20 AM   رقم المشاركة : 4
منيع
براهيم بن حمد/نائب المشرف العام
 الصورة الرمزية منيع






معلومات إضافية
  النقاط : 10
  الحالة :منيع غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد


ابيات رائعه ومعبره
شكرا لكم
تحياتي وتقديري







توقيع منيع
 
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قديم 20-10-2009, 07:30 AM   رقم المشاركة : 5
عمر ال شيبي
شاعر/عضو شرف
 الصورة الرمزية عمر ال شيبي







معلومات إضافية
  النقاط : 10
  الحالة :عمر ال شيبي غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد


صح قلبك والسانك

سبكتها حروف ومعنى

سلمت







توقيع عمر ال شيبي
 
http://www.fatahilah.com/showthread.php?t=92029
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قديم 20-10-2009, 07:33 AM   رقم المشاركة : 6
عبدالرحمن بن زهير
شاعر/





معلومات إضافية
  النقاط : 10
  الحالة :عبدالرحمن بن زهير غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد


شاعرنا صالح سعود لا تخلو الساحه من مثل هؤولاء ولكن ماقصرت فيهم صح الله لسانك وبيض الله وجهك يالجزل







توقيع عبدالرحمن بن زهير
 
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قديم 20-10-2009, 09:10 AM   رقم المشاركة : 7
عبدالعزيز البليهد
شاعر/V.I.P
 الصورة الرمزية عبدالعزيز البليهد





معلومات إضافية
  النقاط : 10
  الحالة :عبدالعزيز البليهد غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد


اخوي صالح الله يكون بالعون الدنيا تبي صبر

تصوير لواقع مؤلم للاسف وعسى الله يهدي الجميع

صح لسانك ولاهنت







توقيع عبدالعزيز البليهد
 
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قديم 20-10-2009, 09:43 AM   رقم المشاركة : 8
داعي الشوق
سعود العتيبي /شاعر/نائب المشرف العام
 الصورة الرمزية داعي الشوق






معلومات إضافية
  النقاط : 10
  الحالة :داعي الشوق غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد



صح لسانك يالشاعر صالح سعود

قصيدة رائعة و هادفه

لله دررررررك

شاعر كبير يا بو مهند

و معروف بالجزالة و الابداع الجميل

صح لسانك مدد

مع التحية لك

،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،،






توقيع داعي الشوق
 
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قديم 20-10-2009, 10:50 AM   رقم المشاركة : 9
الطائر المهاجر
** (عثمان العبدالله) ** المؤسس والمشرف العام
 الصورة الرمزية الطائر المهاجر





معلومات إضافية
  النقاط : 20
  الحالة :الطائر المهاجر غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد



كتبت فأبدعت واجزلت
صح لسانك ولا هنت
تحياتي الطيبة






توقيع الطائر المهاجر
 
تفاعلك مع غيرك يشجعهم على التفاعل معك
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قديم 20-10-2009, 10:52 AM   رقم المشاركة : 10
صعبة المنال
سفيرة الفكر/عضو شرف
 الصورة الرمزية صعبة المنال






معلومات إضافية
  النقاط : 10
  الحالة :صعبة المنال غير متواجد حالياً

 

افتراضي رد: النقد غير الحقد


صدقت

قصيدة جزلة

من شاعر متمكن

صح لسانك

صعووووب







توقيع صعبة المنال
 
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إضافة رد

مواقع النشر (المفضلة)


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